Lords of Third Earth

First off, great job it is a superb drawing, I love anything with a messy style gives it some grit and adds a serious tone to things. Background is great you have definitely captured both shine and shade in the helmet. Now here's my main gripe with the whole picture and that is the sword. I really like this picture but the sword is an eyesore in what is already a great picture it is completely uneven and parts seem out of place. the handle is off by what seems like a cm, and even the blade seems off from the guard. this style sword need to be completely straight, the detail is good just next time draw a line through the center of the characters hand, but don't use it as the foundation as you need to branch off from that to fill out the sword, if that makes any sense. (Sorry I can't explain that any better <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="380" title=" (Sad)"/>). still if that is the only problem then your well on your way.